Wow!
This was a very well made flash movie! Personally, I love Broken Sword and each episode of it. Through your flash, you managed to gain some of the feel from the games, with that mysterious, french/mayan, feel. It was great. I'm glad you invested on the game's music, because frankly, the music just kicks ass. I would probably take time out to improve the graphics a bit, or maybe make your own adventure games, not to do with George Stobbart or his adventures at all.
Overall very good, some nice scripting, just a bit longer, and a bit of work on the graphics. Good Job!